Hey Trasher, I listened a few times. I really like the way your synths/instruments come into teh song and create energy.
One thing I cant stand though is the kick, it doesnt fit in the start.
And around the 28second mark, it feels like the hi hat crash is way too bright, those things really stood out for me.
Other then that I have to give credit on the synths the energy is good, just work a bit more on the beat underneath

Looking forward to more
Also another update on my preview of my work in progress.
Spending quite some time on getting the feel right and I'm getting closer.
Tuned the piano quite a bit in this update, and the overall energy.
Let me know what you think and any feedback is appreciated!
https://clyp.it/hdljllu1
Brapp